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The hyped price of hindsight
a noisy nap
Once thought to be consort music
is wrought with chipped
Shit Cellos

Past~Tense Penance
which ends up a meaty ear curled around the eyelet vowels

Instruments played between the knees
and the brassy sought-taught jaw harps

Rounds in a ring
Woven string
Strained within a
Heart's supple drum

A smile that goes numb while
warm words come
from a pink and soft-wet place






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:iconemmasloane:
Chipped shit cellos - we're just way short on those these days.
Now I'm happy.
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Yeah, the world needs more.
Speedy ends, if there is any mercy. ;)

Many thanks for commenting. :tribute:
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:iconlancelotprice:
You seem to have embraced speedwriting in poem form. :)
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Feels mangled.
It was at first an attempt towards lighter poetry,
something not so depressive or dark.
I was also aiming for something that was more fictional and far away from the feel of my usual thinking.
As always, this experiment started out not too bad,
then as my unhappiness grew with how it was coming along - beats, measures and impact -
the words changed for purposes of truth and flow
while the slippery slope of my less than joyful baseline drove it into a mineshaft.
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:iconlancelotprice:
You gotta go where you are for it to be real.

Surely you were not counting beats? Please say it ain't so.
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:iconthemadmulatto:
I was counting MY beats.
There is no book on THAT shit. :lmao:
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:iconlancelotprice:
I've measured my most recent phrase and it was exactly 2.73 inches long. Perfect! <:turboeyeroll:
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:iconthemadmulatto:
HAHAHHAHAHA!!! :lmao:

I'm just sayin.
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