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His cool approaches, light and tickle-floppy
were like a room full of crisp wet lettuce when I didn't want anything to eat
so I took my clothes off and rolled around in it instead- sweating onions.
Lazy.
Laying face up, I was blowing at the big veiny leaves I'd laid over my eyes
which I found could absorb fever!
Babbleage cabbage
... and it waved away all the thoughts that were not of him.
I saw things through shady emerald eyes as winds came to curl at my sides.

I started thinking about cheese sandwiches.
I wanted to be one.
Then I got up and wrote a poem about all the things I needed squeezed from my filthy pores.

I missed my fevers.
Foiled.
I was well on my way to dying and here comes this truck load of medicinal dew.
Instead, I lived
like a striped, white caterpillar wet with promises of chewy greens to bite and fuzzy wings by night.
Cocooned in a room spun of resolving and evolving life.
:iconthemadmulatto:
Bugs seem oblivious to things bigger than themselves,
but they see you, alright.
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:iconall-my-darkness:
Cavern hands

Only cool the brows

Of January brash dashers

Away

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Never touched

By any

But my only

By reined in

Dear
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:iconthemadmulatto:
It seems suiting we'd both have massive iron pianos
to bang out the melody of mineral and mass that cannot be destroyed.
___________________________________

-thank you for that.
thank you for this.
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:iconjochanaan:
Reading this a couple months after the fact, I'd say you had "it"--baaaaad! 8-) :D :rose:
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Hahhah! Yeah... I was feeling it from head to toe. :D

:iconinloveplz:
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:iconrequiemsandreveries:
"Laying face up, I was blowing at the big veiny leaves I'd laid over my eyes
which I found could absorb fever!"
Wow, this whole thing it wow
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Hee! I'm glad you got it. Pleased you commented, as well! :tighthug:
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:iconalisonblue:
*AlisonBlue Jun 3, 2011  Student Writer
you corner the market on transformation with this one, happy little caterpillar.
I want to take a picture of it and press it between crisp, wet lettuce leaves.
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Thanks :) I like that!
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:icontazpoltorak:
*TazPoltorak May 30, 2011  Professional General Artist
This has got to be my new all-time favourite! I love the imagery, and it grabs your attention from the first lines. A room full of crisp lettuce is ace!
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:iconthemadmulatto:
The image struck me whilst thinking about my love
and the rest just kinda wrote itself. :)

VERY happy you like this!
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