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Finally..People won't be there, even if I cried.
People wouldn't care, even if I died.

Everyone starts leaving.
While I continue on bleeding.

Nobody can hear my cries anymore.
I don't understand what life is worth living for.

I'm slowly giving up.
As I push the dagger through my gut.

I let out one last tear.
Before I cry out my only fear.

I've died here alone.
And no one is even home.

I'm left in the dark
While others seem to part.

I'm dead, I'm done.
Oh look, I've found a gun.

This will surely finish it.
No more life, not one bit.

I hold it to my head.
Boom, And I'm dead.

Finally, it's all over.

DeathI don't know why I'm writing this,
all I have to say,
Is death may be a life style,
That we'll all pick up one day

Unheard StoriesYou always hear or read those stories about preventing suicide. Or for when you want to stop bullying, trying to be more considerate for others. Some that you may have read is the famous story of a young girl who commits suicide and it explains how her whole family and school reacts. How her bullies regretted what they said and all that. And then how a little boy who is crying, you make fun of him, and it turns out that he's crying because his mother died. But what about those who never experienced that? Those who are just having a bad life together? Or for those that are struggling. They still cry..but the most famous stories are about someo

I Wonder..I wonder what It'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will it be soft and gentle.
Or rough under the metal.

Will I feel relieved
Or hard to believe.

I'm not so sure anymore.
I just need to find a cure.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will people start to cry
Or will they leave with a sigh.

Will my moments be treasured
Or my life span left measured.

I really don't know
But I'd really like to go.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will my friends stand by my coffin
Or whither and be forgotten.

Will they look into my crying eyes.
Or my heart full of lies.

I just want to end it all.
I'll go j

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F'eighth Coming of The Loured

by *TheMadMulatto, Dec 31, 2011, 6:48:26 AM
Literature / Poetry / Spiritual / Visual & Found Poetry

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Faith in a mo(u)r n;
so frail,
is born...
it struggles
though thrives in the k'night

When dust
becomes rust
and the gashes
turn to lust,
it feels no th1rst
in the fight.

Oh save them, those so(u)l s
who bump in d'Ark
and cry for those b'Urning
in sun...

throw all the lost
over~boar'd
without cost;

Volcanicly ashed,
every
1one.

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F'eighth Coming of The Louredby *TheMadMulatto

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*chriseastmids Jan 1, 2012

wonderful indeed

*TheMadMulatto Jan 13, 2012

Thanks... that was a new style from nowhere. I guess it's a case of temporary possession.

*chriseastmids Jan 13, 2012

well it must have been a good spirit

*LancelotPrice Dec 31, 2011

Nice rhythm.

Ah, the never happening arrival. I enjoy sitting back with some Early Times Kentucky whiskey, and writing of more important and better things. And playing a pennywhistle or harmonica, basking in the glow of real happiness.

*TheMadMulatto Jan 1, 2012

I just wanna know the pleasures of a flute, man...
I feel I'm missing something grand.

*LancelotPrice Jan 1, 2012

I'd try it if I could afford one, which I can't, but "tin whistles" are cheap.

*TheMadMulatto Jan 13, 2012

Not at all the same, then

I've got much to learn.

*LancelotPrice Jan 13, 2012

The good flutes, as opposed to the student/crap models, probably start at about 3 thousand dollars and up past 12 thousand dollars. Expensive whistles in the standard high D key are about 3 or 4 hundred to maybe 700 dollars, and those are usually custom tuned to your specifications, and made by one guy. You might have be on the waiting list for a year for some of them. The cheap ones, that often sound pretty good, are about 8 or 10 dollars. None of mine are expensive, mostly around 7 or 8 dollars, though my current favourite is 81.

*TheMadMulatto Jan 18, 2012

Got a photo I can see? Or a viewing reference?

*LancelotPrice Jan 18, 2012

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