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Salty Licks and Short Sticks with Soft Shitty Ends
were at every I-Scream Stand that summer
but still, she sought all flavors
hoping her fill would put her to sleep in some
Sugar coma hematoma rigor
from which she'd awaken
some other kind of girl
who suffered no consequences from a gorge.
A gorgeous tour of assorted bores
and still no justified calories.
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:iconthemadmulatto:
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :boogie:
Fav'd! :D
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:iconjochanaan:
"A gorgeous tour of assorted bores"--:jawdrop: Magnificent verbal music that sums up the whole poem. 8-) :glomp:
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Thanks babe! I LOVED when I came up with that! :love:
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:iconphosphoratus:
mhhhh, this makes me hungry :XD:
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:iconkeyanadrake:
*keyanadrake May 28, 2010  Professional Writer
I love how you use words like paint brush.. not just the meaning of the words but the sounds of them. Wish I could do that. :3 :heart:
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Babe, thanks so much for the beautiful comment :)
You can do this, too... everyone has room to give things a shot
that will turn out in their own unique style.
YEAH! :eager: GO THERE!
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*keyanadrake May 31, 2010  Professional Writer
I'm better at painting images with the feel of words rather than the sounds of words. I think sound-writing is definitely your thing. :3
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